writing earth speech hook

By Anonymous -

 here is a example of a good hook in my speech. For an intro

Earth speech

The earth is estimated to be 4.54 billion years, that's a lot of birthday cakes. But us humans aren't taking the best care of it. That’s why we need to take action and stop polluting, or there will be no more birthday cakes for the earth.

This hook is great start to get people interested in the text because it has a fact, humour it makes the reader think


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