Zoe @ Oruaiti school

 

so in a text like this I would get a word, and say it wrong then correct my self and say it properly.    

 we have been learning to be doing chance and data by collecting data and  in chance with investigation and likelihood. 

 here is a example of a good hook in my speech. For an intro Earth speech The earth is estimated to be 4.54 billion years, that's a lot of birthday cakes. But us humans aren't taking the best care of it. That’s why we need to take action and stop polluting, or there will be no more birthday cakes for the earth. This hook is great start to get people interested in the text because it has a fact, humour it makes the reader think

Today we were learning, how humans have an impact on the ocean. Me and Ava worked on this. It is about the Rena, the big oil spill in New Zealand. It was a major cause to the environment and wild life  To date the spill has  killed  over 200 birds, including little blue penguins, shags, petrels, albatrosses and plovers.